1) The main problem with my draft magazine is the way most cover lines are in text boxes which makes it look very unprofessional and untidy. So I am going to changed the layout of my magazine and not use that technique. I think the outcome of this will be a magazine which will look more like the magazines I have been reseraching.
2) The font on my magazine does not fit in with the genre. By reseaching other magazines, I ahve decided that my font should be the same throughout the magazine and I should aim to keep the font simple and bold.
3) The photo i used for the frony cover of magazine looked more like it would appear on a fashion magazine. In contrast to the photos used on the contents page and on the double page spread, it sends out a mixed message to the reader. I am going to change the photo on the front of the magazine, so that it fits in with the music magazine genre more.
4) I am going to include more photos in my contents page. As i have decided now that my magazine is monthly, I will also changed to from 'This week' to 'This month'
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